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Amanda Caixeta @amanda

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Alpharetta High School

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Story Writing and December Stuff

Posted by amanda - November 12th, 2007


Okk... soo, some major updates.

I've been getting sidetracked with the novel.. I apologize to all :[
Only 7 more days 'til Winter Break, so I should get back to that during Christmas.

I'm not sure where I'm going with the story, but I summarized the first chapter:

- Main character is late to school, he's supposed to show up at 5AM to leave for a 10 day field trip.
- He barely makes it.
- He and his group of friends are sitting in the back of the bus, drinking spiked punch and discussing what they'll be doing later in the days.
- Once they arrive at their hotel, their annoying chaperone discusses rules and such, how the men should stay in the east wing of the hotel, and the women in the west. More things like, "If I catch any of you sneaking up to the other's wing, there shall be severe punishments and you will be dismissed from this trip."
- Ok, so, first night in Italy (which is where they traveled to). The main character and his roomate head up to their room, drink more alcohol, and during the late hours, sneak up to the west wing.
- They both go into their girlfriends' suite. All 4 of them talk and drink more alcohol. Seth and Lochie are watching both their girlfriends have some lesbian action, but they don't care. Hey, they're drunk!
- An hour or so later, they head up to their suites again and almost get caught. Seth says to Lochie, "Can't wait to see what's coming ahead for us." Lochie says, "Yeah...", then they both fall asleep.

END OF CHAPTER.
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Disclaimer: These kids are seniors who got promoted to go on a trip to Italy, because they take Italian at school and their teacher thought it'd be neat to bring them there. So, some of the users will be other kids in the field trip, while others are Italians in the story.

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Story Writing and December Stuff


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If you're only going to be 14 I don't think you should be offering any 'sexual favors' online. Anyways you're pretty mature (online) for only being thirteen so thats pretty cool.

Yeah, I've been on NG far too long to act my age.

There are... other writers in the world? Jeeberz. It's my career and you've already done more than me. I'm a failure as a father and a son.

You mean I have to click "ALL NEWS POSTS" everytime I come here, aww.

It's just another thing that makes my life harder.

Well, I deleted all my other previous posts, therefore now I have only 2.

cool skater girl almost 14, can't wait for yer birthday, i would do something but i know nothing other than my sexy dance and smico rules. too bad

Whatevs.

Will you have some NG members in your novel you are writing? And you act more like 16+, not 13. Guessing thats what NG did for you, made you act more mature.

That's a pretty neat idea.
How about I post a sign-up list for the users who want to be in it.. I've never thought of that before. I haven't even written 2 page's worth.

Yeah, I guess I've learned from NG.

Does it have to be either 1, 2, or 3? Anyways, good luck, and if AsftrwR comes here to spam you, ban him and delete the spam posts, he might because he might think you were involved in flagging his reviews.

Yeah, it has to be either 1,2, or 3.

Thanks for the warning.

alos, the list is gettin big, but yer missing about 4 girls i know of, i checked, as soon as i get to there pages again i'll give yu the link

Name you want me to use in the story: Blaine
How old you want to be: 13
Boy or Girl? : Boy
Do you want to be: The loser
Any extra stuff you want to include (i.e. hair color and such): Green hair with a number 1 buzz cut. I'm 6'5(I'm that tall in real life and I'm 13. Yes it is weird isn't it). Really good hacker, programmer, coder, gamer, etc. Hardcore martial artist.

Thanks for joining :D

I'll have to think up some way to fit those in the story, but I'll have it.

I am so going to win the animation contest! >:D
I want my cock sucked >:[

Name you want me to use in the story: Lochie.
I want to be 15-16 years old.
A Boy (The hot one, of course).
I want to be the emo kid, with blonde hair.. I know it sounds wierd, but you know the blondish gold type.. emo.. stuff.. you get the idea.

Me love you long time.
-Lochie.

Me <3 you too :3

Glad you're interested in joining the competition :)

And of course I'll write about you.

*Blushes*
Oh I feel so loved! :]

*Starts baking birthday cake.*

btw happy early birthday.

Name you want me to use in the story: mikey
How old you want to be: 14
Boy or Girl? :boy duhh, look at the name
Do you want to be:3. The attention whore

Any extra stuff you want to include: red and black hair, not muscualr, gets into fights alot and crushes on the main character ( lol a big twist, DUNH DUNH DUUUUUNNNNHHH!!, DON'T USE THAT UNLESS YU WANT TOO, and the main charactersa girl right?? )

Nah, the character's main name is Seth.

What does the 13 stands for?

Age and because I just felt like making it that way >:f

ahahah, my best friends almost boyfriends name is seth, seth jumped my REAL real best friend and he ended up on the ground, he apologized cause he was about to fight shawn ( the first friend wuth the boyfriend named seth) it was funny, funniest moment in my life next to, "the run on". also, amke him very aweosme and popular instead, but still a attention whore ( and since i'm makin him like me, make him a apoet, its true, i ryme and make poems, don't say anything!!)

Name you want me to use in the story: Carl
How old you want to be: 14
Boy or Girl? : Girl
Do you want to be: 1. The loser
Any extra stuff you want to include (i.e. hair color and such): Glasses, Red hair, Retainer, curly hair, wears boots.

: hardyboyz1 says:
: go fuck a two headed orphan babys cock and i hope he shit blood and herpies
: down your throat you fuckin pathetic no life faggot cunt

stfu asshole.

This Modern Love <3

she was a skater girl

he....

hold on....

YOU CAN'T RHYME A WORD WITH SAME WORD!

boy should not be a rythme with boy and girl should not be a rythme with girl.

THIS IS THE DISCOVERY OF THE YEAR!

*claps in amazement*

good day miss. as you may have noticed i am the general. please visit me and leave a comment

Name you want me to use in the story: mitch
How old you want to be: 14
Boy or Girl? : boy
Do you want to be: 1
1. The loser 2. The emo kid 3. The attention whore
Any extra stuff you want to include (i.e. hair color and such):
black hair, glasses, fairly big, almost always in a slightly cheerful mood

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